Production Principles

Storyboard Rotation::

first pass of the 20 panel storyboard of a coffee shop scene

25 panel storyboard (2nd pass of the coffee shop scene)

I think the art style is really cute, actually I think it’s just cute in general.
I really love that panel of them starting to punch each other, it’s really cute.
I really like the dynamic angles like when they both look at the card reader and character B looks down at the reader in shock.
Cute characters, they are quite reminiscent of anime :). Also the dynamic angles are used effectively to enhance certain moods like tension. I love the small details like giving the characters some personality when the girl reads a book and the boy just naps there after having their food lol.
On the third page where they were looking at the menu, does the time skip immediately to them sitting? Or are there more character interactions where they order and find their seat,etc etc?
Hmmm to improve,, u can maybe describe the bg music if theres any,, Also, if u add a bit of tone value colour thing in ur storyboard to make ur characters pop out from the bg for a bit more clarity

3 panel storyboard inspired by one of the quick observational drawings

Love the needle scene and the setting is so dramatic and comedic.
The needle being the centre of our attention is a nice detail.
Yooooo ur sketches are so cute !!! Love the backgrounds on the main storyboard,, so detailed. The expressions on the characters are also very clear.

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